I looked up at the building in front of me. Main Street Books was the name on the front, and I pondered whether or not I should go in. It had been over two years since I stepped foot in a bookstore. We had been forced to close ours down after my co-owner and father had taken ill. We knew he was sick – and in a way we had been prepared for his passing, but it still irreversibly changed my life in every way. I closed my eyes, felt the breeze pass over my face. My eyelids were illuminated under the glow of the sun. I tried to imagine what my father would say if he was there with me. “Go in you silly girl! You can’t avoid bookstores forever!”
So I did, I stepped in and somehow, I found myself home.
This post is a response to the Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers challenge. Photo provided by Dawn Miller.
Really enjoyed your story!
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Aw thanks Sonya!!
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Excellent! It engaged me right away and I loved the ending. Awesome! Thank you for participating and I hope you continue. 🙂
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Oh I definitely will! It’s such a great idea!
I appreciate the feedback :))
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I really enjoyed your story!
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You’re sweet thanks again!!
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That sense of being at home in a bookshop is very familiar to me!
A lovely little story
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Thank you so much!!
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I loved your story, great ending
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Thanks so much!
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Such a great story! Thanks so much for this one 🙂
Ellespeth
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Thanks so much!
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This was a sweet story about loss and facing fears, I recognized the themes right away. I might have liked to know a little more about their relationship or the anticipation of walking into the bookstore, it’s been two years! It was a nice story. Good job!
I’d love some feedback as well if you get the chance. Thanks in advance 🙂 https://romancedonewrite.wordpress.com/2015/02/20/flashfictionfriday-vol-1-the-book-tour/
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Thanks for the feedback! I would have liked to explore that a bit more but I was worried Id go over my word count! Oh well – practice!
I would love to check yours out, when I’m home again I will definitely !
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I found this great tips on writing flash fiction on someone’s blog. I should post it..one of the tips was on editing so we can get as much of the good stuff as possible.
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Nice use of first person – we can really put ourselves in her shoes.
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Thank you so much! I appreciate feedback
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Bravery can take you to all sorts of interesting places. You told this tale so very well.
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Aw that’s so sweet! Thank you so much for the feedback!
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