I ran my fingers across the gritty, coarse surface of the rock formation. Completely upright, it lent itself to my hands. The small crevices and valleys allowed my fingers to rise and fall as my feet made their way into circle after circle. It had been three years since my mother passed; not without silence. We had come here together so often to sit, backs against the side by side forms. We gazed at the sky as the sun descended into it’s routine rest. She’d recite poetry, I’d listen with open ears.
“Remember
That on that day, at that hour, I shall lift my arms
And my roots will set off to seek another land.”
On that day, at the hour, she did lift her arms. And she did, find roots in another land. Till I reunite with her, this is the space in which we find each other again, momentarily.
This is a response to Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. Photo prompt graciously provided by Louise with “The Storyteller’s Abode”.
This is a sad but very beautiful story! Thank you so much for participating in FFfAW challenge!
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Thank you priceless joy ! That means a lot to me :))
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You’re welcome! My pleasure. 🙂
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This really is a beautiful take on the prompt. Captured the emotions with your words 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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Lovely.
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Thank you 🙂
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A beautifully sad story. You capture the love and grief really well. 🙂
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Thank you! 💕💕
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Beautiful, mesmerizing and such a heartfelt story!
Brilliant job 🙂
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Thank you for the kind words! It means a lot
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